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Post by Solo on Aug 19, 2010 16:21:55 GMT -5
SOLO
NAME; Solo, Real name unknown (will explain in history)
NAME MEANING; Nope
ALIAS NAMES; The Spirit of the Sea The Surfing Shinigami
AGE; Real Age-241 Appears- 22
GENDER; Male
RACE; Shinigami
RANK; 7th Division Captian
POWER CLASS; A Class
HOW DO YOU LOOK?;
- Tall
- Handsome
- Long Hair
- Serene Look
- Muscular
Solo is a very tall man with a young appearance though this is decieving seeing as how he is over two hundred years old. His hair has a light pink tinge to it, and it often gets him picked on. However he makes up for that with his muscular build. Sporting broad shoulders, and a wide chest he is not a little man at all. His arms, and legs are just as muscular as the rest of his body, and he doesn't a six pack instead he has a twelve pack.
Solo stands at 6 ft 3 inches in height, and he is 220 pounds of solid muscle making him rather intimidating to look at. However to balance out this intimidating look his face always wears a serene expression that makes him look perfectly calm no matter what emotion he is feeling. He always wears a smile however, and only gets a serious expression during a fight, and it is rare to see him frown.
His clothing consists of the traditional robes of the shinigami being black with white trim, and a white sash around his waist. Though when he changes out of this clothing he can be seen wearing a white shirt with a black pair of shorts to match with it. Though he will normally be seen wearing the robes of the shinigami.
HOW DO YOU FEEL?;
PERSONALITY;
- Cool
- Calm
- Arrogant
- Relaxed
- Seductive
Solo whole heartedly believes that he is god's gift to women, and will act like a charmer to any girl that he deems good looking gaining him the name of "The Pervy Captian" though he is a bit of a manwhore he isn't terribly bad. He just likes to hit on pretty women though he does sometimes take it to far, and it ends up getting him slapped. In his entire career of trying to get women he has succeeded a few times, and this only boosts his already large ego making him prone to try it more.
If he does hurt or offend a woman he does feel ashamed of himself, and he will normally go sulk for a few hours afterwards before he is back to his usual cheery, and calm self. He always does his best to make it up to the women that he offended by sending them gifts, and chocolates. If those don't work he will go to great lenghts in order to show them that he is really sorry even going as far as writing a thank you later in the sky using his abilities.
If you can get past the pervy part he is actually quiet the romantic, and he knows how to treat a woman with respect, and comes up with many various ways to show them how much they mean to him. Though there has only been one girl that was brave enough to get that far under his skin, and ever since he has become the flirtatious captian that we all know today. It just takes time.
Solo is a very arrogant man thinking that he is a gift to women, and even going as far as insulting some of his opponents that they can't beat him. While that may be true because very few have ever seen his abilities outside of his shikai form he very rarely uses his bankai unless it is absolutely necessary though that doesn't stop him from bragging about it. He loves to show off to people, and prove that he is superior though this often does get him in trouble with others.
To go along with his arrogance he is a fairly calm, and collective person often being able to assess even the most dangerous situation without being bothered much. On the battle field he is a very dangerous foe because he shows no emotion, or fear in the face of danger, and even once in a while he laughs at it. For the most part he doesn't let things get to him, and he can be a great ally if you show that you are a good friend.
SHOW ME YO' MOVES;
EQUIPMENT;
- A small notepad that he writes stuff in though no one knows whats in it.
KIDO;
- He is capable of using all Kido spells up to 58.
Shinigami Techniques
- Shunpo Expert- Thanks to his many years of training Solo has mastered the use of the Flash Steps Technique being able to move at extremely fast speeds. It allows him to catch rouge shinigami quickly, and swiftly.
- Immense Spiritual Pressure- Solo even without releasing his Zanpakutou has immense spiritual pressure being able to instill fear into those of a lesser rank than him with just his presence. This allows him to use his many powerful techniques without tiring out quickly.
- Immense Speed- Even without using the flash steps alone he is a very fast person. Being able to disappear from sight one second, and appear in another place in the next second. When this is coupled with his powerful fighting style he can quickly overwhelm an opponent.
- Spirit Board- This is Solo's own personal technique that he made up on his own. His own personal variation of Shunpo he makes a board made out of his own spiritual energy that resembles a surfboard that he can use in conjunction with either his Shikai, or his Bankai form to ride the water that he creates. He can even use it to just ride the air, or anything that he wishes even lava if he wanted. The board will only stay around as long as he wants it to, and when he wishes it to go away the board will disperse.
ZANPAKUTO;
ZANPAKUTO NAME HERE Reisu
- Zanpakuto Spirit: In its normal state it appears as a normal katana that expands up to 4 feet. It is a bit longer than normal in order to accomodate his fighting style. Reisu takes the form of a teenage boy with with pale white skin, and dark purple hair. His teeth are sharpened like small fangs, and he has dark lines all around his eyes. His eyes are black with no pupils, and he always looks angry. The world in which he lives in is a is an isolated island in the middle of the ocean that is constantly plagued by storms, and other disasters that he trains in, in order to make himself stronger.
- Shikai Phrase: "Surf's Up!"
- Shikai Appearence: When he releases his blade it transforms into a surfboard that is 6 feet in length, and it enables him to ride on it with relative ease. When he goes into this his robes change from their normal state into a button up white collar shirt that is undone revealing his chest, and white cargo shorts. He is no longer wearing sandals, and he looks like a beach goer in the summer time.
- Shikai Abilities:
Main Ability: The main ability of his shikai is its ability to control water. This limits his control to water that he creates, and natural sources nearby however. When he activates his Shikai water forms underneath the board, and it allows him to ride it anywhere that he goes with relative ease. His board creates an unlimited amount of water that remains afloat in the air creating a path of water that allows him to manipulate it with his board. He can do many things with this from spinning to create a whirlpool, to making a massive wave that would crash into someone.
Bankai
- Release Phrase: "Create the Giant Wave! Awaken Reisu!"
- Bankai Appearence: While in his Bankai state his entire wardrobe changes with him gaining a new appearance to show off his new powers. He gains armor that looks like fish scales on his shoulders for shoulder pads, and leggings made out of the same matierial. His chest is completely bare in this form. Around his waist is a piece of white cloth that is wrapped around him, and it flows behind him. The cloth looks like a mermaids tail. His surfboard in this form stays, but it turns into water that he is able to ride.(think of ice man with water)
- Bankai Abilities:
Main Ability: This ability works in a similiar way as his Shikai States ability except in a more refined way. In this form he can control water to a greater degree, and use it in more ways than before. Like this his spirit energy becomes pure water, and the area around him for 20 feet is filled over 100 hundred gallons of water that he can control. His spiritual energy is constantly creating water, and because of this he is a very powerful opponent being able to recreate any water that he lost in a single instant. In this form he can create tidal waves that are capable of destroying buildings. Also if he is in a body of water he gets stronger, and faster, and he can breathe underwater. He also gets better looking.
Water Field: With this ability he makes all the water around him form into a giant sphere around both him, and his opponent trapping them both inside. His opponent will be trapped in an air bubble that is proportionate to their size so that they can breathe, but they will be vulnerable to attacks while trapped in it. Which gives him the upperhand in a battle. The Sphere can vary sizes depending on how much water is around in the immediate area.
Water Bullet: Holding his hand out in front of him he condenses the water that is his weapon, and he makes it more powerful using his spiritual energy to condense it. With as strong as it is it could blast through rocks with ease.
Tidal Storm: He uses this ability when he has as much water that he can possibly summon around him. With this attack he makes several large Tidal waves that re made even stronger with his spiritual energy, and he smashes the opponent with them. This attack is made even more powerful because after the opponent is caught in the waves he uses his water manipulation to form a whirlpool that can suck up debris, and harm the opponent even more. While inside the whirlpool the opponent will be hit with debris, and even get cuts because of the spiritual energy that he uses to make the water condense.
WHAT ABOUT THE PAST?;
The Death of a Surfer
Alexander was an American surfing champ, and he had never been beaten by anyone before. Surfing, and the water was where he belonged. However Alexander was a bit unique among the other people around him in the fact that he saw things. Things that were not there. It happened when he went around certain cemeteries, and places that were supposed to be haunted. He saw things, people to be more specific, and sometimes he saw other things that he thought were demons. He saw horrible things like the demons eat the ghosts, and the ghosts trying to get away from the demons. However it was always futile they always died, if a ghost can die.
It was on one such occasion that his life took a turn for the worst at first, but later on it got a lot better. He was visiting a haunted place, and he saw a ghost, and it looked frightened so he figured he would follow it. Though instead of walking this ghost was running away from something. Alexander looked around, but he couldn't see what it was running away from so he ran after it trying to catch up. However what he saw horrified him. As the ghost ran out of nowhere came one of those black demons that he had seen around, and it swallowed the ghost whole. Anger, and frustration got the better of him as he watched this.
When he got mad his spiritual energy, and pressure leaked out revealing how strong he was, and then the demon turned its sights on him. Now it was Alexanders turn to run, and he ran as far, and as fast as he possibly could. However it wasn't enough, and he was soon caught by the creature, and he managed to fight it off for a bit. However eventually the demon got the upperhand, and it crushed his body. However before he died he watched the creature die as its head fell off. Then he felt peace.
Memories Lost Solo is born
The peace that his body felt ended, and he woke up with a chain handing out of his chest, and he had no recollection of who he was, and where he was. The last thing he remembered was that demon's head falling off of its body. So it felt like hours, but he drifted around the city that he was in, and he tried to remember, but every time he tried it gave him a headache. So with no purpose, and no memories he wandered around as a floating empty shell of who he once was. He wandered around for what felt like a few hours to him, and that was when a strange person dressed like a samurai came to him.
They had apparently been looking for him, and before he could ask any questions they hit him on the head with hilt of their blade, and he felt this great uplifting feeling wash over his body. Then he passed out again, and he woke up in a new place. This time he could feel everything around him, and stood up realizing that he was in a city of some sort, and he looked around only to see that he had become a bit younger than he had previously been before coming to this place. He looked like he was in his early twenties.
Waking up he realized that he was alone, and he still didn't know who he was. He didn't even know his name so he figured that he would make up a name for himself. A name that would make him known in this new world. It took him a minute that he finally realized what that memory that he had meant, and what the other ghost did to him. He was dead. Though at first the thought scared him he eventually got over, and realized that he could do more good like this than before, and he could do it solo. That was when he realized what his new name would be. Alone, and with nobody he knew that, that would be new name. So he took up the mantle of Solo.
The Academy gives birth to a Captain
After coming up with his name he eventually joined the academy, and after his six years he graduated with high marks, and went on to become part of the 7th squad. He started off as an unseated officer, but he learned how to harness his skills, and he started to move up in the ranks of the squad that he was in. The first time that he moved up to a new rank was when he achieved the shikai form of his Zanpakutou. It was the first time that he had ever felt like he had belonged.
It had happened during a battle actually which is rare for a shinigami to achieve their Shikai like this. While he was trying to harmonize with his Zanpakutou he was attacked by a group of hollows, and he tried to fight them off. However he lacked the power to fight them off at that moment, and they had him on the ropes eventually. He was hacking, and slashing at each of them, but there was no way that he was going to win, and he knew that he was going to die. However that all changed soon. Because right before the hollows could deal the final blow he heard a voice.
The voice was his Zanpakutou, and it dragged him into his inner world, and it told him its name. However he didn't get to stay long, and he was soon back to getting pummeled. With his new knowledge however he activated his Shikai, and with his new abilities he quickly overwhelmed his opponents with ease destroying each of them, and purifying them. After unlocking his Shikai he moved up to become a seated officer, and he marveled at the fact that he was now making a name for himself.
After a while of doing missions with his squad he soon moved up to become the lieutenant of Squad 7 however this was not enough for him. So for the next few years he trained, and he trained until he once again entered his inner world, and he spoke with his Zanpakutou spirit. Then with a great effort over the next three years he learned how to manifest his spirit in the physical world, and in order to achieve his bankai it told him that he had to beat himself in combat. So his Zanpakutou summoned a doppelganger, and he did battle with himself.
The battle lasted for what felt like ages, but eventually he defeated it, and that is when his doppelganger merged into him, and he felt his body change, and his power increase dramatically. His spirit disappeared smiling, and he realized that he had finally achieved his bankai, and he spent the next few months perfecting its use so that he could become the strongest in his division.
Trial by combat
After mastering his bankai he challenged the current captain of division 7 to a trial by combat so that he could become the new captain. So Solo gathered 200 witnesses, and they both met on the battle ground of the soul society. The fight lasted for over a week with each of the shinigami giving it their all, and it eventually the two of the warriors reached their last resort. Both of them activated their bankai, and then with renewed strength, and determination they both fought again, tearing apart the battle field just from the force of their swords colliding.
Eventually Solo was able to gain the upper hand by converting most of his spiritual energy into water, and then using his most powerful attack he eventually won the battle by trapping his opponent in a massive whirlpool, and almost drowning him. When he landed on the ground Solo held his blade to the mans throat, and he submitted admitting defeat at the hands of a stronger opponent, and then the old captain retired leaving the fate of Squad 7 in Solo's hands. Now Solo refines his skills, and continues to look through the world to find the key to remembering who he was before.
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Post by Soren on Aug 20, 2010 0:43:17 GMT -5
*quickly snaps fingers* Sorry to say but your captain would be A rank, as such tone down his mastery over Shunpo and the lot. You can't be a master of all the techniques anyway, for instance if you are a master of Shunpo that is pretty much it take the Kido master, spirit pressure stuff out. It can be above average but you are not like... Jesus. Stuff like that is for leader class characters. Your zanpakuto is denied, it is a direct rip off of Kaien Shiba. [/center]
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Post by Solo on Aug 20, 2010 1:09:09 GMT -5
*Snaps fingers back* I don't mean to be rude considering you are a mod however lol. I changed everything, and toned down the spirit pressure so that it instills fear into those that are weaker, and if you have a problem with that you can go look it up on the wikia, or any other bleach site that has info as it is quiet common with someone with high spirit pressure to have that affect on others.
Everything that you asked for has been changed except for my Zanpakutou, and I won't change that because when I was making it I wasn't even thinking about it, and I only looked him up after someone brought it up in the c box so in no way was i ripping him off. If you have any problems with it I think you should take it up with the other mods on what to do or we could take it to the rulings, and appeals board. Because there is only info on Kaiens Shikai not his bankai, and I didn't even copy his spirit so there should be no reason for my Zanpakutou to be denied.
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Post by Soren on Aug 20, 2010 1:19:05 GMT -5
I am an Admin. I have to take it up with no one. Your shikai is EXACTLY the same as Kaien Shiba's. Exactly the same shikai, it doesn't matter if his spirit is different or if the bankai is different. Neither of those were ever shown. You have a blatant rip off of a canon character's zanpakuto. That just won't fly here. You claim that you didn't look him up until after the fact and while even if that is true, fine and dandy it doesn't change the fact that it is nigh exactly the same. If you don't want to change it, that is fine with me, it will just never be accepted I guess. [/sub]
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Post by Solo on Aug 20, 2010 1:55:49 GMT -5
It has been changed
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Post by Soren on Aug 20, 2010 2:03:59 GMT -5
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Post by Sakurazuka Kazai on Aug 20, 2010 16:40:58 GMT -5
2/2
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